Comments for Chloe Frick http://chloefrick.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Mon, 19 Jan 2009 02:44:09 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on What is the most important technological invention to benefit society? by ritajeanstangherlin http://chloefrick.edublogs.org/2008/12/07/what-is-the-most-important-technological-invention-to-benefit-society/comment-page-1/#comment-3 ritajeanstangherlin Mon, 19 Jan 2009 02:44:09 +0000 http://chloefrick.edublogs.org/?p=6#comment-3 Chloe, Never use the question in a prompt as a title. -1 P1 "Finally books" put a comma after finally. P2 capitalize English; " asking about" eliminate "about" -2 P3 "our own, unique" no comma between 2 items P4 is your strongest paragraph and best writing; just excellent in every way Overall, commendable sentence structure!! Good P5. No EC but overall, a fine essay. Chloe,
Never use the question in a prompt as a title. -1

P1 “Finally books” put a comma after finally.
P2 capitalize English; ” asking about” eliminate “about” -2

P3 “our own, unique” no comma between 2 items

P4 is your strongest paragraph and best writing; just excellent in every way

Overall, commendable sentence structure!!

Good P5.

No EC but overall, a fine essay.

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